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| Kasie 2003-06-19 ch 1,  | this is kasie ashley's friend. I like this poem. It "speaks" to me you know what i mean. I can feel your intention when i read it and that means a lot. ok bye Kaise |
| Samantha 2003-06-09 ch 1, | This is the first one I have read of your poems. A little intimidating but very good. |
| InMemoryofPhil 2003-05-28 ch 1,  | Yeah, you can tell what you're feeling when you wrote it, but hey, that just makes it easier for us...well, me anyway, to get a better feel for the writing. Good job |
| Shadafakup 2003-05-24 ch 1, | I doubt you planned this one out.. Because its raw and its very strong.. Very well written.. Im sure many of us may feel this way.. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2003-05-22 ch 1, | Very VERY good poem! it expresses how you feel very well and it's beautiful! *The poem I mean...* I love the way you explained it, you made it so that anoyone can relate to it! GREAT JOB! |
| Con Hino 2003-05-22 ch 1, | I like the flow, and the ryhme, the topic was good too, i'm just wondering, Is this suppose to be in stanzas? |
| La Luna Mia 2003-05-21 ch 1, | very well written, i could feel the anger there, ur right, it does show through to ur poetry, good job and well written |