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| Shiegra 2004-04-20 ch 1,   | actually its spelled phooka...but a cool story so far! |
| XtrM 2003-11-29 ch 1, | I believe your style, however you come by it, is to not just tell a story, but make the reader live it. Ofcourse, that's what every writers tries to do, but I think for you it's subconscious. Anyway, good job, I like it so far, but the goth chicks that are so common in the horror field are begininng to go the terrible way of cliche. |
| wacka dkid 2003-07-28 ch 7, | poor dante. unlucky esma.. hm. i have no clue where this review is going. stopping.. update soon! please |
| Pash McDohl 2003-05-31 ch 6, | Aw, who knew a satanist could be so oodjum-puddum-tay? I want to schnoogle him for some reason. I'm going to stop using nonsense words now. |
| Robin Mask 2003-05-31 ch 1, | Great start, your a good writer, i hope the rest of the story is as good as the begining. |
| Pash McDohl 2003-05-27 ch 3, | Looks like someone's been hittin' "They Fight Crime!" Heh...anyway, I like Library Guy. I dunno why. He's just kind of awkward. This frozen yogurt's disgusting. Ah...I caught the reference to my car (or lack thereof); it feels like we haven't had one since I was five. ^^ |