i'd really like to know why most authors like to put in ppl seeing/hearing/spying on other couples having sex. i'm not a fan because to me it cheapens the whole thing, so could you kindly tell me what is so appealing about voyeurism? and yes i hated the entire first half of this chapter.

This is just as great as part 1! Did I tell you that I really like your writting style? It's just so imaginative and well written!

=D

A THIRD PART?! YAY! lmao.

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Excellent... That's all I can even say about this story.

Oh, so sad! I'm so sorry for poor, poor Ignis that he once again loses his love.

I hope that they'll be reunited in the next arc, they deserve to be happy.

ah.. and so ends the second part... too bad you haven't written part three yet. -_-; All right. It's late, and I should sleep. bye! hope you write part three soon!

heh. they went and got drunk... well, marzio got drunk... o_O; lol. red wings... hm...

argh... blast the editing... -_-; And your site's bandwidth is used up for the day... *sigh* I want a massage. XD I'm all sore from playing tennis. Whoo, the misunderstanding was resolved in one chapter! And ick to the niece. *makes a face*

aw... o_O

LOL. ha ha ha ha. The bit at the end was funny. ^^

yup, I agree. I don't know WHY he doesn't just chuck the high priest out of the highest tower... but it's probably politics again. blah.

ha ha ha ha... -_- I would damn fp.net, but that would do no good. Anywho, yay for them releasing all their sexual tension... or at some of it! ^_^

ha ha ha ha ha... for the thoughts that I can guess are going through Marzio's mind... and gr... For the High Priest dude and Kelan... I sense a conspiracy! O_O;

^-^ I love your story! =( I tried to read Part 2 chpater 10 in your website, but I cant. Can you please e-mail me part 2 chapter 10? Please! Thanx!

Wow, this story is great. I love it very much. Please update soon.

Thanks for making such a wonderful fic. ^^