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| Roberta Pryce Robinson 2004-03-24 ch 1,   | Hmm, this could also speak for many mortals as well, and I often wonder why! A good write! |
| Charloteller 2003-07-15 ch 1, | 2 words: Loved it. It does seem like theres some ** sat in the clouds trying to torture us all sometimes. Seriously, this is really good. |
| Strina 2003-06-17 ch 1, | Awesome poem. And thanks for your good reviews. I love good reviews! |
| Necromania 2003-05-26 ch 1, | Amazing...Breathtaking dear. Where do you find it in you to write like this? I absolutly loved it. You are very lucky, I have a problem rhyming and sounding half-way decent. Another thing...You have no email adress it seems, so I figured I would read something of yours and contact you by means of review. I'm sorry that my story bothered you. (I am the author of "To Die For") I am glad that you did like it at first though. Next time, please read the warning before delving into a story. MY warning clearly stated that the story you were about to read was incestous. ^_^ You are the first person to complain about it. Why brothers you ask? Well, you see, the fact that they were brothers gave it a much more dramatic effect in the end. It wouldn't have been as sad if they had merely been, say, dormmates. Thank you for your honnesty though. |
| PsychoBunny 2003-05-22 ch 1, | Really nice. I like it. The idea is really great and it's put together perfectly! |
| hoellenwauwau 2003-05-22 ch 1, | Wow, this is cool. Really dark and angry and full of emotions. Maybe you want to read my poem "Darkened Light"? I think it fits somehow...Anyway, great job! Keep it up! cio, hoellenwauwau |
| Selene Rousseau 2003-05-22 ch 1, | Simple yet so Powerful! |