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Reviews For: Pushing Me Away

basketballgirl89
2005-08-01
ch 1,
you got to be kidding me is that for real or was that just her halucenating has she taken a hallucagen (sc) ...right?
dragonboy3611
2004-03-24
ch 1,
Wow that's a switch with the statue. Freaky but really good.
Cara-the-Great
2004-03-07
ch 1,
I really liked that! Please write more soon and keep up the good work!
But may I suggest that you add more detail to yourself(main character)?
I liked both the beginning and the ending to this chapter. "A flippin' statue!"
That made me laugh. Also... aside from that one little comment, we wouldn't even know you had a brother; could he get some more detail also?
Oh... names! Names would be good too. ^_^
I really like this story so far; please please update soon.
Me
2003-05-29
ch 1,
Good start! Keep updating!
yasmin182
2003-05-22
ch 1,
wooh...interseting
Zenin
2003-05-22
ch 1,
I LOVE IT!

Original, unique, brilliant, poignant...everything is perfect! You've got a great, glorious beginning to something that has all the makings of a masterpiece. This is publishing material, Tione!

Now, don't skimp on the description (har har)... This looks to be your finest story yet!

Well then. I'm duly impressed. I really, really am. This is brilliant!

~Zenin
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