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| basketballgirl89 2005-08-01 ch 1, | you got to be kidding me is that for real or was that just her halucenating has she taken a hallucagen (sc) ...right? |
| dragonboy3611 2004-03-24 ch 1, | Wow that's a switch with the statue. Freaky but really good. |
| Cara-the-Great 2004-03-07 ch 1, | I really liked that! Please write more soon and keep up the good work! But may I suggest that you add more detail to yourself(main character)? I liked both the beginning and the ending to this chapter. "A flippin' statue!" That made me laugh. Also... aside from that one little comment, we wouldn't even know you had a brother; could he get some more detail also? Oh... names! Names would be good too. ^_^ I really like this story so far; please please update soon. |
| Me 2003-05-29 ch 1, | Good start! Keep updating! |
| yasmin182 2003-05-22 ch 1, | wooh...interseting |
| Zenin 2003-05-22 ch 1, | I LOVE IT! Original, unique, brilliant, poignant...everything is perfect! You've got a great, glorious beginning to something that has all the makings of a masterpiece. This is publishing material, Tione! Now, don't skimp on the description (har har)... This looks to be your finest story yet! Well then. I'm duly impressed. I really, really am. This is brilliant! ~Zenin |