Please do not take this as an insult but constructive criticism. This poem was not very interesting and not very touching. What you could do is to try to be more playful with words because you used a lot of common words that people use a lot in their usual teenage angst poetry and it gets boring after reading a bunch of them. And maybe you should look at some of Sylvia Plath's works her poetry is very interesting even though it's usually depressing, but study her use of stylistic devices and her word choice. Maybe you could learn something .

~Ohh my!~
This absoluetly almost made me cry since this is the way I feel about my life. I feel like I want to die as well. ~only to die~. I love your stucture. Beautifully written. To me, you'll make a great poet. Maybe consider being that when you grow up.You made me think that you are my idol.That is like you're a professional. You gave me inspiration. I know you will suceed! Please put some more up like this! and plz read my fics too. Please. It would be my honor if you would. You are a true poet! Bye! Good Luck!%^-^
~little6wolf~