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| shifter_chik 2005-03-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that was powerful, and beautiful, amazing. I love you writing style, it was really wonderful to read something like this. ^..^~ |
| Approaching Autumn 2003-07-22 ch 1,  | abuseA bit confusing with the character changes, but very good... |
| B 2003-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuse::worships you:: The tone in this is perfect, as are the descriptsions of the years at the beginning. But my favorite part is easily, " Emma tends to think of things in terms of people. The people are her family or her friends or maybe movie stars. Sometimes, they only last for a day or two. "Emma's life has been Elizabeth for the last six years." So... good... ::dies, but happily:: The whole party situation felt very, very real, too; something anyone who went to high school (probably most people, I'd assume) can relate to and easily be pulled into. Is there more? ::hopes so:: Anyway, fabulous job. ::more worshipping:: |
| Frogger No Baka 2003-05-28 ch 1, | abuseDear lord, Omni... excellent. :) I love it. ~Michael Is that only one part? |
| Shimmerwings 2003-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, angstfully good. And, although I like happy endings, I like this ending also. Well written and good and stuff. *is uneloquent* |
| no name 2003-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is defintely as good as what I find on the shelves. Emotions are vividly described,while being quite realistic. Very interesting to read. An awesome piece of work! |
| no name 2003-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is defintely as good as what I find on the shelves. Emotions are vividly described,while being quite realistic. Very interesting to read. An awesome piece of work! |
| M.O., again 2003-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust read it again...oh...bloody hell...this is so good, hannah. I want to give both of them hugs. thing is...I think they'd sort of stare at me...and I'm not sure I could give random people a hug. *runs for tissues* |
| Merlin's Quill 2003-05-22 ch 1, | abuseWow... geez... **is speechless** That was so unbelievably awesome... wow. **favorite list** But... wow. **is in awe** That was... brilliant... amazing... One thing that sort of... amused (if that word can be used)... me was thinking about what they were thinking when they read this... I mean, just out of curiosity, what would you think if someone came up to you and gave you a story that they'd written about you, which was... hmm... dare I say strange? But then again, that word doesn't quite fit... but I suppose it will have to suffice... o.O... or... hmm... what if it describes their true feelings? o.O... ok, mind running away now... **runs after it and guides it back on track** But anyhoo, this really was utterly amazingly brilliantly awesome... the whole thing... I can't even pick out one part that was the best... the whole story was... wow. **hands you sacred muffin and bows** =^.^= Me |
| Stage 2003-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseAW. ::snuggles Emma:: Stage |
| M.O. 2003-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuse*hugs Omni very tightly* Oh...oh...oh...that was better than I ever could have imagined. you're right...it couldn't have worked out happily...because...yeah. But still...*thinks fondly of the two of them getting together* Ohh...wow. Wow wow wow wowowowowowow. *hits print* Good job, m'dear. God job. |