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The Postmodern Prometheus 2004-09-11 . chapter 1
so funny, so quintessentially you :)
Kelpylion 2003-12-10 . chapter 1
LMAO! Cheerfully irreverent, feminist, and untraditional, and a couplet to boot! This rocks!
The Libran Iniquity 2003-07-24 . chapter 1
Very, VERY amusing, and very, VERY true, especially in light of the gender wars we see so much of nowadays.

Yours,
TLI
elf-bi-dragon 2003-06-04 . chapter 1
this is great. exactly how i feel. nice rhyme and vocabulary. keep up the good work.
Raining Star 2003-06-03 . chapter 1
this was awesome! i love this, and i agree wholeheartaly!! women like that ** me off!
"So maybe I'm trapped in a pit
Give me a spade, I'll do my bit"
i agree totally. people say im too independant, well thats bull! this was great, awsome!
Meemo 2003-06-03 . chapter 1
Yes I like your poem - not a girly girl meself so understand where you're coming from. However you will find as you get older that blokes have their uses (no not that!) The man is currently at home painting the house while I work!
Elisabeth286 2003-06-02 . chapter 1
heehee, great!
keep it up
Cinders 2003-06-02 . chapter 1
*snickers*... Thats just great... I loved it!
glitterjewele 2003-05-24 . chapter 1
lol! that was so great! GO FEMINISTS! ! ! :P that totally rocked, loved it muchly. this was probably my favorite part:

I don't need steeds or poncey hats
Or blokes in tights who look like twats
I don't need twerps with toothy grins
A bone fide dumb-** prince

hehehe just hysterical and oh-so-TRUE. simply wonderful. GO LISA-ANN! woo-hoo! :P GREAT piece, kudos!
Angelic Wings 2003-05-23 . chapter 1
I get the message. Hey, I don't like that kinda life either. Nice poem.
Dirty Wallpaper 2003-05-23 . chapter 1
damn, this was a great poem, a poem has never made me smile that much before...it was great and so true, im not gonna be giggling like a doof just over a male i mean flip, i have better things to do like have a life for instance...you captured teh essence of what some of us girls go through with guys and social espectations like wearing dresses *blah* and YES FOOD IS TO GOOD TO GO TO WASTE, and dont get me started on clothe sizes.
"I'm no fairytale, loud and clear
Prefer my blokes away than near"
LOL, im speechless, fantastic poem, never have a read a poem which has related to me as much. kudos, this is definitley going on my favourites list, great job
Callieluvspink 2003-05-23 . chapter 1
I love this poem! You did a great job!
Psycho-kyugurl 2003-05-23 . chapter 1
That was cute. You just have to be you.
Rowan 2003-05-22 . chapter 1
Hehe...my that's good. Me like muchly. Muchly like me. Oh boy, I think I'm stoned.
JewlofGreen 2003-05-22 . chapter 1
I like ur poem. It's really good.
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