I really like the way you use roman history in your story and the way Tiberia speaks. This is great, keep on writing!

I really liked your story, lest I not leave a review! But anyway, the general story is very flowing and I like Tiberia's struggle throughout. One tip though: the punctuation goes inside the quotation marks. EX:

And",

And,"

Anyway, nice job.

*Faery Tragedy