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| Writing4Eternity 2006-08-11 ch 11,   | You have too finish biznit! |
| Grunge Muffin 2003-12-23 ch 2, | This is good! It's currently quite late and I'm in trouble for spending too much time on the net, but I'll be back to read the rest of this later. Good work so far! |
| griffin924 2003-12-04 ch 11, | hi i love ur story write more its really weird but kool and she should be with Hayden it would be perfect bye |
| Salsbury Princess 2003-12-02 ch 11, | Please continue! I really like this story genre |
| SAngel 2003-12-01 ch 2, | It sound good so far, I can't wait until I have time to read the rest of it |
| JazzeeT 2003-12-01 ch 10, | urmm hmm and the saga continutes.. u know that you are good with this forensic case mombo jumbo stuff.. well update soon. *yawns* its bedtime |
| Onion Ring 2003-11-30 ch 11, | Good start so far... Well the grammar needs some work which makes it hard to read but the plot is quite fine.. i like the relationships growing among Lisa, Hayden, and Dustin, as they do not all seem to be perfect people. I alkso read your Forever Friends series since Lisa forced me too when i complained to her i was bored that is also quite a ncie read, exscept its so long its so hard lol and i have the attention span of a gold fish. Well it's pretty good, just proof it so its easy to understand, keep writing! Check out my fics when you have the time. |
| Penny 2003-11-30 ch 11, | you do know that you updated the last chapter twice? Anyway I just read all of your chapters and what you have written is wonderful! So spokey and romantic all at the same time! ~Penny |
| Raine0211 2003-11-29 ch 11, | Yay! I can finally review. It's NOT a crappy story. It's good. I lvoe your characters and the interaction and you sure know your stuff about forensics. I still think that other guy is the culprit. The one she's dating. Great job girl. write some more soon. ~Your fellow authro and forever friend ~lisa~~ |
| Raine0211 2003-08-19 ch 10, | Well, I'll be on and off sporadically for the next few days...but...anytime I'mm on...hit me up for an idea...kk? |
| Raine0211 2003-08-14 ch 9, | I was waiting anxiously for this update...so excited. This was so good. You really did research this stuff. GREAT job. It shows so much. You worked really hard. I love this story. Continue the good work. Love your forever friend and fellow author, Lisa |
| Raven O'Connor 2003-08-09 ch 9, | Interesting chapter! Hehe..maybe Dustin didn't do it..but he could also have an accomplice! Post more! |
| luckynumba7 2003-08-09 ch 9, | OMG i LOVE YOU! LOL thank you so much for updating and *gaps* he's escalating!! This does not look good... and i wonder what is going to happen with dustin.. maybe he's not it... maybe he has some connection... *ideas form in head* LOL dude if you need help just ask me... i have lots of ideas... sorry i didnt' mean to sound rude if i did.. well anyway update real soon love luckynumba7 |
| luckynumba7 2003-08-09 ch 9, | OMG i LOVE YOU! LOL thank you so much for updating and *gaps* he's escalating!! This does not look good... and i wonder what is going to happen with dustin.. maybe he's not it... maybe he has some connection... *ideas form in head* LOL dude if you need help just ask me... i have lots of ideas... sorry i didnt' mean to sound rude if i did.. well anyway update real soon love luckynumba7 |
| IcyDevil27 2003-07-19 ch 8, | Well, I read through the entire story. It's really very good! I think, though, that she should go out with Hayden, but that's just my opinion. :-) I enjoyed the story immensely. |