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| Mephistophilis 2005-05-25 ch 2,   | *blinks away the tears*wow... seriously awesome...Wouldn't u like to know that most, if not all of them, describe how i feel right now...They are super, well written and the feelings come right through them... one can actually SEE the feelings! Well, not really... but u know what i mean!! |
| Ifylla Wyvern 2005-05-23 ch 2, | Cheers! These were all awesome. I LOVE the Fuzzy Turtle, sounds like the purple cow poem, only original. And the first poem is touching. 8i don't normally go for rhyme, but yours is actually a good one, and not corny at all. |
| Rb 2004-02-26 ch 1, | Hey Em... Very nice poem...and I agree...there is more to you than what people see. Keep writing will ya. ;-) -Rb- |
| The-Shadow-Kitsune 2004-01-24 ch 1, | *nods* your poetry is just as good as your stories... -Little neko aka Dark_Nekochan |
| LadyAnesta 2003-10-07 ch 1, | i kno what you mean chica ::nods understandingly:: i kno... *Mallie* |
| Rain Styormz 2003-09-22 ch 1, | niners...you rule! this is GREAT!! and i got like 20 more to put up ehh-heh makin a new penname later though cause my mom keeps checkin em! well later!! ~*~Rain~*~ E-MAIL ME!! |
| fairies-wear-boots 2003-07-31 ch 1, | Very nice... well no it's not nice but you know what i mean. Defiant pain, perhaps? Hmm... i like the idea of you being able to see what everyone is... and that they underestimate you and you're shutting them out... which is basically the whole poem. I like the whole poem is what i'm trying to say... lol |
| irishdancerx33 2003-06-09 ch 1, | interesting...sumthing to ponder... |
| midnight dreams 2003-06-02 ch 1, | ^^ hai, hai. *hopes that she wouldn't touch, look, speak, be kind, consider, smile, or underestimate you.* *sigh* I like this poem...very different from the one's i've read. yay you. Come read some of mine please? Thank you. ^^ |
| Anon. 2003-05-25 ch 1, | That's a wonderful poem and song (if you wanted to make it into one). I kept on thinking of a melody when I read this, so *shrugs* that might just be me. . . It's very true, by the way. Some things about you, no matter how much someone analyes or prods, are just meant to remain hidden. |
| Iruka Irahara 2003-05-25 ch 1, | There is always something more underneath..a lot of times you just don't want it shown. I love it. Very deep and true. Iruka |
| Ice Dagger 2003-05-24 ch 1, | indeed an interesting point you get across here. it's really very well done. the spacing makes it a tad hard to read, but still, i really like it! the way you express all the frustration and confussion around you and all the people trying to understand, but making matters worse. very well done. |
| Ifylla Wyvern 2003-05-22 ch 1, | *claps* nice. when i need to vent my feelings, i either write stories/poems/songs or i go and beat up on whatever i can find - be it my little brother or a toy or a bed/pillow. |