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Reviews For: I Used To

Nemonus 2006-05-24 ch 1,	Allright. Less than 'epic', but worthwhile, a little done-before, a little waiting for the characterization of why the wizard is writing this, especially if all wizards in his world are evil. The prose is pretty good, modern, but mayhap you should check paragraph spacing.
Jessica Wright 2005-08-29 ch 1,	Wow. This is really good.^^ I got a bit confused when you mentioned the names, but I figured it out later...
Midnight Dancer 2005-08-10 ch 1,	Wow. This would be good if you make it longer. I like that darkness and pain... oh well I think I can't help myself lol
An Inside Joke 2004-01-04 ch 1,	Neat story, but it needs to be broken down into paragraphs. It would be cool if you continued it.
Summner 2003-12-13 ch 1,	Interesting reflections from the character's POV. It seems as there is almost a bit of remorse beneath the bitterness, some what like a 'sour grapes' approach. Very well written.
Em Jovial 2003-12-11 ch 1,	Nice... Is this just a one-shot thing or is this a story? Because this would make a very interesting story!
thefireburnswithin 2003-11-16 ch 1,	Wow. ^_^ That cool. Maybe you should think about making it longer. Tell what he did afterwards. Where he went and stuff like that. Ah. Fire and Spirit. Interesting concepts. It puts depth and darkness into the story. Continue. PLKitty. ^.~
Insane Authors 2003-11-13 ch 1,	Wow. That was...deep
Lost-in-Insanity 2003-10-02 ch 1,	How dark. It was written well though
warnthepenguins 2003-09-16 ch 1,	Excellent. There'd better be more to this story...threatening fist
Shadowgirl 2003-07-14 ch 1,	Interesting reflections, but I must say nicely done! The description used in the story really helps to convey the imagery.
Werecat99 2003-05-26 ch 1,	That was dark, but I certainly liked it. Perhaps you could use it as a prologue to a bigger story.
Weirdlet 2003-05-23 ch 1,	I like this character, and I like roleplaying with him!

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