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Reviews For: Fight Between Angels

ROMAN EMPEROR
2004-06-10
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good, Im really into angels. This is going straight into my fav list
Rosie Seifuku
2003-08-03
ch 1,
abusewhoa, interesting...it gives me creepy mental images of the fight between good and evil. nice work!
SicksisterSam
2003-07-22
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting poem I like it Wicked brillant! Laters!

~Sam

PS Thanks for the reviews
no more school ever
2003-05-23
ch 1,
abusethat's really sweet
Dream and Write
2003-05-22
ch 1,
abuseThat's the most intense 50 words I've ever heard. It sound better as a song then as a poem. Seriously, keep writing. I'm putting you on my Author Alert.
LilMissPassive
2003-05-22
ch 1,
abuseThis a great...you are a great writer and keep up the work...i really enjoy this...cant wait for more
Brief Candle
2003-05-22
ch 1,
abuseI liked that a lot... the imagery was really great and... I know absolutely nothing about poetry so don't even listen to me.

There was one line though, that should be fixed..

"There always fighting"

That should be "They're always fighting"

I also really liked the line "Wings being cut"... I don't know, it was only three words, but I read that and I was like, "This poem rules."

So yes, that was probably one of my more inarticulate and immature reviews... but the point is, this was good.
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