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| ROMAN EMPEROR 2004-06-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good, Im really into angels. This is going straight into my fav list |
| Rosie Seifuku 2003-08-03 ch 1, | abusewhoa, interesting...it gives me creepy mental images of the fight between good and evil. nice work! |
| SicksisterSam 2003-07-22 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting poem I like it Wicked brillant! Laters! ~Sam PS Thanks for the reviews |
| no more school ever 2003-05-23 ch 1, | abusethat's really sweet |
| Dream and Write 2003-05-22 ch 1, | abuseThat's the most intense 50 words I've ever heard. It sound better as a song then as a poem. Seriously, keep writing. I'm putting you on my Author Alert. |
| LilMissPassive 2003-05-22 ch 1, | abuseThis a great...you are a great writer and keep up the work...i really enjoy this...cant wait for more |
| Brief Candle 2003-05-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked that a lot... the imagery was really great and... I know absolutely nothing about poetry so don't even listen to me. There was one line though, that should be fixed.. "There always fighting" That should be "They're always fighting" I also really liked the line "Wings being cut"... I don't know, it was only three words, but I read that and I was like, "This poem rules." So yes, that was probably one of my more inarticulate and immature reviews... but the point is, this was good. |