lol i think this culture will be the death of us *cough*remembertheromans*cough*, but it seems to be out of control - and if my interpretation of this oh-so-well-written piece is any indication i'd guess that you agree with me on most points. :P i really liked how you added the "yet it made us kill," to the first stanza, thereby signifying the imperfections of both cultures. i found this funny: "horse and livelihood." :P liked the lines "will it tumble us to the ground/broken beyond fixing?" good one!