Short and sweet. Aww...

*smiles wickedly* actually, i smiled once when the girl skipped away the first time, and the last line just added so much morbidity to the piece . . . a great way to depict the hidden malice of the world. loved it. favorite lines were "wafting delight," "frozen faded," and "inside/a secret smile hides." chilling. and very, very good! kudos!