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semiconscious 2005-10-24 ch 1,	abuseTHIS IS RETTY MUCH ONE OF MY FAVOURITE STORIES EVER WRITTEN. AND ITS BEEN SO LONG! I SWEAR IF IT DOESNT GET UDATED SOON.. (TWENTYSEVENMONTHSOFUPDATELESSNESS!!11!K1heu2gr)I WILL. CRY. AND. UM. BE EXTREMELY SAD AND POSSIBLY create a voodoo doll of you (ill obtain a piece of your dna SOMEHOW) and make it write. MAKE IT. coughcough point is, update. I still have hope.
Wolfwitch 2004-01-25 ch 3,	abuseOh! I found this again! Yay!
Aire1 2003-12-16 ch 3,	abuseThis is good. I'm glad Jeremy and Josh finally got back together. But please, update soon!
cordy 2003-08-07 ch 3, anon.	abuseoh god! i feel fuzzy all over! that was beautiful! wa write soon! they are adorable!
Wicked Wonder 2003-08-01 ch 3,	abuseNo wonder you asked me where had I been! How was I to know that you were drumming out a whole new story! Enough with the exclaimation points. This was good, glad to have you back, and please update soon! You rock!
Rue Zokorai 2003-07-27 ch 3,	abuseYay! They're reunited!! ::throws a party and jumps around singing like a maniac:: ..oh..yes. Back to the review. ::attempts to control himself:: Anyway. Another great chapter!! ^^ I just love the two of them to death. And Angie was great in this chapter too. You're such a great writer. I'm sorry I didn't get around to reviewing sooner, but I finally did! ^_^ Write more! When you get a chance, I mean. Cuz..I can't really talk about updating, hehe.
Shadowy Fluffball 2003-07-17 ch 3,	abuseCONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE
NotEnough 2003-07-17 ch 3,	abuseYou know, you take ages to update. You suck at updating, but i guess it's okay i mean at lest you're writing right? RIGHT? \\that is a hint to update SOONER rather than LATER// Well, i am glad this isn't a dream as well \\glares evilly// and they have finally found each other. But that's rude, taking the spark out of his eyes. What did you do to him now huh? HUH? See, and you say you're not evil. Ha, that's so laughable \\starts laughing// Well, update soon. REALLY soon. Please?
Sinner Heart 2003-07-16 ch 3,	abuseNO O O O O O O O O O O O O Damn you Britain you did it again, right when it gets really really good you leave me hanging. I need more, I must have more, I can't live with out more, well not really but you get the point. Yeah yeah yeah I know I'm slacking in the poetry department and OH I did finish the first chapter to my new story but I hate the ending lol. Well I guess that's gonna be it but I will be pestering you now on the next chapter hehehehehe. ~Elsebells
Ang 2003-07-16 ch 3, anon.	abuseYeah! We're takin' over, baby! We shall rule the world!
Eternal Twilight 2003-07-16 ch 3,	abuse:stars in disbelief: My little Britt-Britt- damn, I love you, girl! ^^ Once again you amaze me with your chapter! ^^ I loved reading from Jeremy's POV, and the reuniom was just so sweet. :melts: But what I don't get is the spark thing- but I guess I'll just have to wait and find out, yes? ^_~ Anyway, Britt, a wonderful chap from a WONDERFUL friend- eventhough she does think I'm a 'cradlerobber.' :winks: Update soon, dear- no wait, sooner than soon- start writing- NOW! :cracks whip: ^_~ hehe...I'm messed up. Anyway, I'll shut up and hopefully catch you online! ::muah:: ~CeCe ^_^
Rue Zokorai 2003-07-01 ch 2,	abuse::spins around:: Alright! The extremely depressed Rue is gone! That was really, really weird! I don't really believe that was me, it was so..dark. EEk. Well, anyway! I loved this chapter, it was so sweet..well..until Josh woke up. I hate dreams like that..so nice..until you wake up. I wanna hear what Daniel has to say! I wonder..will it be like the dream? ::thinks:: Hmm..well, continue soon! I can't wait to read more! ^_^
Ayakaishi Fei 2003-06-25 ch 2, anon.	abuseDamn you... That dream was so realistic! Poor Josh... he so sad! More, please? Update... before I cry! And what is Daniel about to say about Jeremy!
cordy 2003-06-25 ch 2, anon.	abusewhat? what about jeremy? oh you cruel cruel person! and the dream part... i was getting all happy and then you smashed it into pieces! glares oh but is was so cute! god i love this fic! poor josh i feel so bad for him... make him happy! he sufferd enough! please update son
i-nv-u50 2003-06-23 ch 2,	abuseack O.o; couldnt read it sooner T.T anyway, pushy reviewers are only terribly scary when they bring out the DOOM pens :D (back! back foul demons!!) O.o;; anyway, great chapter. you really had me going there, with that jeremy dream bit (you evil evil person you :D I applaud you XD) and how could you leave the story there?!?!?! update soon, i wanna know what's up with jeremy T.T

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