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Frito the Great 2004-07-08 ch 8,	Whee... I love this story so much. I know this is old, I've been reading this story for a year, then I lost it. I loved the Dark Horse, I wish you'd finish it.. if you haven't. O_O Eek. Love it! Bye!
yeah81 2004-06-24 ch 8,	It's not over yet, is it? It can't be over...this story is too good.
Jezebel Malice 2004-02-07 ch 8,	hey...i've read 'The Dark Horse' i think i like this better though keep both up ~jessi~
FigureItOut 2003-12-07 ch 7,	I read this awhile ago... ch. 7 wasn't up yet, but still, I'm scared, because this story is just crazy and I didn't think anyone had that much talent... sheepish grin rambling I know, but It's your fault...
sweetspontaneous 2003-10-04 ch 8,	i love this. i absolutely love it. about this chapter, in particular, it is difficult to explain exactly how much i appreciate the meanings here. ...ack, i'm not making sense today anyway...but thankyou
bleak reality 2003-10-02 ch 8,	There's not much I can say that I haven't said before. Artwork in words girl. The development of Lauren through this bit of history is really amazing. I would never have guessed she had something like this behind her. How she must have coped with this guilt . . . woah. I'm awed, really. Love the minibar. Cute ^_^
Frito the Great 2003-08-30 ch 7,	wow.. somehow missed this chapter a second ago.. anyway, ditto what i said from review from chapter 6!
Frito the Great 2003-08-30 ch 6,	This is a great story.. you may remember my review from ff.net and your story.. er.. i forgot the name, sorry, but it's my fave story on the site.. I like this one better only because I'm going through horrible depression because my best friend.. yeah I'll shut up now.. main point: Great story! Can't wait for the rest!
she who must not be named 2003-08-18 ch 7,	heh.. in that book it says to have a good evil nickname. but on a more serious note... that chap rocked it on through. your words send me shivers.
sweetspontaneous 2003-08-13 ch 7,	ack. i'm an addict, absolutely; i'm hooked. every time i read a chapter i end up grinning madly and it doesn't stop for a long time... this chapter hit closest to the bone of any, so far; i'm feeling shaken, but in a good way. all this by way of explaining awkwardly and inadequately exactly how much i love this story ...breathless, as always; you can't stop now...
leeny pie 2003-08-13 ch 7,	i just read all of it. chapter one through seven and all i can say right now is -- wow! i really like your style of writing. going from point of view to point of view. and Mick is an awesome character. the one thing that pulls both kate and lauren to think about things a little more clearly. was one of the characters you by any chance? or at least modeled after yourself? i checked out your webpage and i picked out a few similarities between you and lauren. but perhaps that's just me... except for the chef thing. IM me or something i'd love to chat. ~leeny
ja 2003-08-12 ch 7,	yes! new chapter! great chapter, hope u update soon! (im kinda like out of words right now..so til the next chap then!)
european coffee addict 2003-07-06 ch 3,	Not bad so far. It really feels realistic to me. One of the good stories at FP. :)
bleak reality 2003-07-06 ch 6,	“Kiss me goodbye.” Hugs fic to bitsies Mick is wonderful, funny but not too much so. I love Lauren being cautious about hugging Kate. It's such a contradiction that she's so shy but outwardly so confident. Hugs fic more Still amazing, girl!
ja 2003-07-04 ch 6,	Quick update! I love the ending, your ending line was so..true..Yay! now i can sleep peacefully..until tomorrow that is..Lauren's just so brave, splendid attitude. Magnificent characters.

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