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| Chord 2003-07-18 ch 1,   | Compelling. The transition inbetween the last four lines was brilliant, abstract images to intangibility itself. ~chord |
| sweetspontaneous 2003-06-19 ch 1, | i love this. "...like a stray cat...just wanting more" i like the connections between the thought and what is being said, and the conversational tone. it reminds me, for no reason i can think of, of a poem by elizabeth bishop called "one art" |