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StoicCrying 2008-09-26 ch 62,	You are going to try to publish this? Really? That would be awesome
StoicCrying 2008-09-26 ch 63,	Okay,I'm still sad about the dying episodes with Sean,Matt,Jake, and Nate! I was telling my mom about it, and even she cried! Hope you update sooN!
StoicCrying 2008-09-25 ch 59,	I swear, in this whole hour (20 minutes to read this chapter and chapter 58) I cried so much! I mean I stopped crying, then I started to feel very sad and cried again, and again! I'm actually bawling my eyes out...
StoicCrying 2008-09-22 ch 2,	Cool! I think that's really sweet of Matt! I'm gonna read the rest. (About the quote- It burns! Lol. Trust me, it burns for like 15 minutes.)
blackandwhitemiko 2008-09-12 ch 6,	strange fact i felt like sharing: I wanted to know the actual dictionary definition of nymphomaniac and found out that it's "Uncontrollable or excessive sexual desire in a WOMAN!! the male word is satyriasis! weird...
precipice492 2008-08-15 ch 1,	i originally started reding this because i saw how many reviews ot had and thought that with that ,many there had to be somthing good about it, this story is awsome so far! I guess theres someting to be said about review numbers!! :)
Rinkika 2008-07-24 ch 48,	I just started reading this a couple days ago, and look how far I got! I normally don't review in the middle of complete stories, but I hat to this chapter. "Mmhmm. You know us Americans. Always with the sex." Seriously, that made me giggle-snort. XD And you know, since I'm here, I may as well actually review. I actually prefer Jake and Nate over Matt and Sean for some reason. I just love the smaller build that Nate has and how he's into dance and more "feminine" things. And then Jake is such a hard-** with a traumatizing past. Then for the worlds most amazing coincidence, their fathers who they didn't know for most of their lives are gay and together. Simply amazing. :] Anyways, onward to the next chapter! ~ R!n
Ty Taco 2008-06-30 ch 10,	I LOVE YOUR STORY! I'm only on 10...but I am definitely gonna keep reading! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox, Ty
kanari kireteru doll 2008-06-29 ch 63,	Read this AGAIN on my way up to Canada today, as usual, great read... it just doesn't get old for me =) Cheers & luff
Seeker of Knowledge 2008-05-22 ch 63,	i really like ur story... have u given up on it or has your modem just been down for a realy long time? ^.^ please write another chapter whistles, bells and applauses, etc. (>^) ...yaoi is fun... (^
oppsy 2008-04-30 ch 2,	Your americans keep speaking English ... hahahah err, what i meant was they keep using british slang. you probably haven't noticeed because it seems normal to you but the beginning chapters could be rervised for that. gothboy's influence after can affect how others talk but the beginning chapters they're pure americans without uk influence.
Raine-Luna 2008-03-27 ch 63,	I can't believe that I never got the chance to review this... in... EVER! Well, now I do. I just have to say, you have me transfixed to around 63 chapters [and counting?], and it's so lovely that you ended this entire story well, even if it had to 'end' with the death. Gah, there's always Remember Me, but you haven't updated that! [Both of you, anyway...], and it's just not the same! Anyway, review: Breakdown mode. [That means it'll look kinda weird, like those things that you see on magazine reviews and crap. Highest score is 5.] Plot: Wonderful, wonderful plot. Not only that, but there were TWO STORIES mixed into one BIG one! I'll be honest and say that I like Jake's and Nate's side of the story better, because there are more 'challenge'-elements. Or maybe I'm just an angst-**. Whatever. I liked the substance in Jake's and Nate's relationship-from how they met, to how their relationship developed, to how their parents are suddenly involved with their lives, the baby, and even how they die. It's quite tragic, though, how Nate had to die so young, and how Jake committed suicide-through a means in which he promised not to do to himself-even when Nate might have wanted him to move on! As for Matt and Sean, well, EVERYONE loves Matt and Sean. Their bittersweet relationship is so ideal, even their FAMILY is ideal! It kinda proves how parents don't have to be straight, and can still grow a stable home for their children. Kellen and Brie grew up wonderfully [and Kellen's parents' "example" rubbed off on him!]. I wold doubt that Nate and Jake would have a stable home, but if they had been alive, I would doubt that. Your plots and the relationships portrayed here are so touching, and just proves how one person needs his 'significant other' in order to survive, to cope with life bein' a b!+c#, and how soulmates can change each other. It was really awesome that you can still offer to write bonus chapters, and a sort-of sequel [but not really sequel] story. Follow-up on this if you have time. Not that I'm pressuring, but it would be wonderful if you do. PLOTSCORE: 4.25. Characters: The characters are LOVABLE. What's not to love? Oh, by the way, Sean is a nympho. XD but no, seriously. I'd say I love Matt's character the most. He's loving, and caring, and damn all those attributes you'd wish your significant other would have! Nate and Jake are like warm and cold, but they kind of balance each other out. Brie is adorable, even more so is Kellen. Lovely characters. CHARACTER-LIKENESS SCORE: 5~ [dingdingding!] Character Development: I would definitely give this a 5, straightaway. The characters progressed so much! Sean and Matt were so different in the beginning [High School] than they became when they were working.A character that really developed was Jake. I actually thought that he was going to stay that way for good-and then he had to go kill himself. :( Either way, I liked the way the characters were portrayed. Character Development score: 4.5 Grammar: I would like to say that you missed a few things, but I overlooked it. I can't give a score XD Overall: Well. For capturing my attention with a wonderful story, I'll give you a 4.5. :D And, this is where I day thanks a lot for writing such a beautiful story. I really hope you continue to write more eye-capturing, memorable work. Stories such as these are unforgettable. Good job. I super-hope you write more. :)
the-typical 2008-03-19 ch 18,	D: I can't believe I never favorited this! :3 read it the secon time through, and it's still as good as the first time! Love it, and love you guys for writing it!
Glowfish 2008-02-29 ch 28,	I think Fluffy is a fine name for a newt, my sister had a pirana named Fluffy. P.S I love this story!
RenaiKuro 2008-02-25 ch 2,	Snorting a pixie stick. It is like heroin for poor kids that are not allowed to do drugs. It will ** your system up...oddly. Basically, you are shoving pure sugar into your body. Never snort the red pixie sticks. Those...red snot. That is all you need to know. The safest one to snort is Orange Pixie Sticks.

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