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| Iammealso-JulieCranford 2003-08-13 ch 1, | abusecool. |
| The White Rose 2003-06-03 ch 1, | abuselike the concrete alot. the ending was kinda confusing for me at first though. oh and u, whoever the last person is, might wanna try commenting on the actual poem. |
| Keep it 100 2003-05-23 ch 1, | abuseAwesome work! That concrete poem was really something. ~Heart of the Sword |
| CoolBeans18s 2003-05-23 ch 1, | abuseNice! I liked the first one. It rhymes! The seconds one's format is interesting too. But change the summary. ~ CoolBeans18s |
| iridium 2003-05-23 ch 1, | abusenice . . . but you should change the summary. "i had to write these for school" doesn't really describe anything about the poems. |