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| Mlle Sara 2004-07-22 ch 9,   | loved the ending, the writing style was equally addictive as well :) |
| starsprinkles9604 2004-06-30 ch 9, | Very very cute story and ending! I had lost in touch with this particular piece and thought, hm, I wonder what's going on with it. But yeah, awesome writing. You had just enough so that it wasn't an overkil on words but that there was enough for th reader, if that makes sense. I wish I could do that! All I seem to do is write write write! Perfect length here. I felt horrible for Scott when he got thrown up on, but it was cool that Tessa was around to help him out. Very very nice writing. Peace love and skittles! |
| Not Just a Little Girl 2004-06-26 ch 9, | Wow.. this is brilliant! Your writing is fantastic -especially the description :D Loved every chapter of it :) |
| Alex and Louisey 2003-11-12 ch 8, | Tehe I'm laughing, but lousiey ain't Lol MORE PLEASE LOVE ALEX ps |
| Alex and Louisey 2003-11-12 ch 8, | Tehe I'm laughing, but lousiey ain't Lol MORE PLEASE LOVE ALEX ps |
| LadyAnesta 2003-10-02 ch 6, | ::stares hard and will next chapter to appear:: |
| Random Girl 2003-09-25 ch 6, | OH COL! RED LACE! I LOVE U SUZI! Now all I need is a date hm... Oh yeah and is that dress the same one as the one in my planner I drew? |
| Alex 2003-09-04 ch 5, | NO ONE LISTENS TO ME?! Eh...*Shrugs* Lol MUSHROOMS ON TOAST! Hehehe Randomness strikes again. C ya at Lunch Love Alex BOOGERS! Lol \\(^_^)// |
| Alex 2003-08-05 ch 4, | I AM IN THE STORY! YEY Hey... Suzi... Do i get a superheroine costume coz I want one Lol Thankies *Hugz* MORE CHAPTERS! please Lol ::Giggles:: Alex X |
| starsprinkles9604 2003-07-17 ch 3, | Good chapter. I think you should do another point of view, just to get some other input by another student, like someone who hadn't really notcied him before, but does now. Are you going to have him eventually get Jennifer? If you did, then she could be that person who noticed. It all depends on what exactly it is that you want to happen in this story. |
| starsprinkles9604 2003-07-17 ch 1, | really really good chapter. Poor scott...getting ditched by her...she certainly wasn't very nice! Good chapter though. Peace love and skittles |
| LadyAnesta (to lazy to sign... 2003-07-14 ch 3, | hehehe :) more! 0:) *Anesta* |
| Deana Bell 2003-07-08 ch 3, | Wow. You have amazing writing talent, especially in the descriptive area. Pretty great how you turned a one-chapter thing into a...um...multi-chapter thing. Thanks for the review! ~God bless~ |
| Lost Butterfly 2003-07-02 ch 3, | O.o...o.O...DAMN YOU!...You can write in first person...LOL... I like it... It's kute...Scott seems kute in a dorky way... I think maybe Jo likes him?? @_@...Hehe. I like the way you described things, wished i can be that descripedtive.;_; UPDATE SOON! I wanna know more... Arigatou(thank-you) for your review...It really meant lots...Thank-you...lol...I need help on my story though... ~always~ §~*Shorti*~§ |
| FFStoryteller 2003-06-25 ch 3, | Hm... The Janitor as my boyfriend... He better be a spy under cover then! Lol JK well I LOVE ::Runs about insanely:: the story and so does Luigi (Louise Squidgy-widgy) Lol don't ask me where that came from, well must go and insult the REAL Scott Hende now Lol Love Alex X |