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| Bohemian Muse 2003-11-02 ch 1,   | This poem was so sad. I'm not sure if it was meant to be sad, but I thought it was. That poor boy! A world without love, that's HORRIBLE. Like I said, I'm not sure if you meant for people to be sorry for the boy or to be inspired by the boy and live alone like him, or what, but I really wish he'd reconsider. Especially if that boy is you. |
| mizu no kokoro 2003-09-30 ch 1, | Aw. i feel, yesa i do. |
| Anagronax 2003-08-09 ch 1, | You should put this under angst too I think. And yes, it really is good. Although personally I liked "Unfettered Soul" more, but that's just a matter of taste. |
| dazzling angel 2003-07-05 ch 1, | this is really good! awesome!! you are really a good poet! by the way, i'm sher mayne... hahaha |