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Reviews For: The Morning After

Infinite Smiles
2004-01-23
ch 1,
I love the way that you put the emotions of guilt and increibility into words. Niceley done..
The B.A.T
2003-09-27
ch 1,
Damn... such a strong feeling of betrayal in this piece. And the hope that it's all just a dream, I never thought about it that way.

-Yusef "The B.A.T." Pittman
IHJ
2003-08-26
ch 1,
Ohh... *shiver* First poem I read about this particular...topic. I've never had one-night stands with STRANGERS, but I DID have a, um..uh...rendezvous with my ex-ex boyfriend. I felt a bit dirty afterwards, but we did acknowledge (without words) that it was a MUTUAL one-time (okay, fine. MORE) happening with no emotions and strings attached.
I like how you rhymed and the thoughts of the person is well laid out. *applauds* However, I hope this didn't ACTUALLY happen to you!
Anjeni Windsinger
2003-08-20
ch 1,
Very good! It's clear what the person is going through, you brought it out nicely. Great work.
Anagronax
2003-08-10
ch 1,
This would be the reason why I don't drink, smoke or do any nasty drugs...
Niceness...
KellyNick
2003-07-25
ch 1,
One Word... Wow... that was great!
PurpleLilac
2003-05-28
ch 1,
Rather sad wouldn't you say? Anyway, since when did you start writing THIS kind of poems? =P
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