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| Infinite Smiles 2004-01-23 ch 1, | I love the way that you put the emotions of guilt and increibility into words. Niceley done.. |
| The B.A.T 2003-09-27 ch 1, | Damn... such a strong feeling of betrayal in this piece. And the hope that it's all just a dream, I never thought about it that way. -Yusef "The B.A.T." Pittman |
| IHJ 2003-08-26 ch 1, | Ohh... *shiver* First poem I read about this particular...topic. I've never had one-night stands with STRANGERS, but I DID have a, um..uh...rendezvous with my ex-ex boyfriend. I felt a bit dirty afterwards, but we did acknowledge (without words) that it was a MUTUAL one-time (okay, fine. MORE) happening with no emotions and strings attached. I like how you rhymed and the thoughts of the person is well laid out. *applauds* However, I hope this didn't ACTUALLY happen to you! |
| Anjeni Windsinger 2003-08-20 ch 1, | Very good! It's clear what the person is going through, you brought it out nicely. Great work. |
| Anagronax 2003-08-10 ch 1, | This would be the reason why I don't drink, smoke or do any nasty drugs... Niceness... |
| KellyNick 2003-07-25 ch 1, | One Word... Wow... that was great! |
| PurpleLilac 2003-05-28 ch 1, | Rather sad wouldn't you say? Anyway, since when did you start writing THIS kind of poems? =P |