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| handle187 2003-09-16 ch 1, | abuseWhen enough people say the same thing, soon or later it becomes hard to ignore. Just ask Big Media. Good! |
| Anjeni Windsinger 2003-08-20 ch 1, | abuseGeez, I should get my step-dad to read this, lol. He's always ranting about the 'mall-rats' we see downtown. Maybe a poem like this will make him see! Great work :) As always, keep writing! |
| Anagronax 2003-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI agree! Not completely though... Why would anyone wants to put rings through their noses? I mean, it's the first thing that will be hit when you bump into a wall and if it has rings in it then it should be quite painful... Anywho, it's an interesting poem. |
| Shadows Fall 2003-08-09 ch 1, | abuseOh,that's so true. Great work. |
| ajcutie07 2003-06-22 ch 1, | abuseomgosh that was soo good! i agree completly! good job keep it up |
| PurpleLilac 2003-05-28 ch 1, | abuseI can't believe noone has reviewed this! Never mind coz on the second hand, I get to be the first person to review this! You know my favourite line 'And our hair is streaked bright red and blue,'! That was just simply way cool! |