Reviews for The Fairy Kingdom II

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Kaybookworm 2008-05-22 ch 4,	Ah! I want more! I love all you're books that I've read and I can't but help but beg for you to post your next chapter. You know I think it's funny becuase in tour first book of The Fairy Kingdom how it mentioned Sheldon likeing her and now Jaques and Carrie are together now, akward! I dont just want more, I need it! I know you might be busy but... PLEASE! I'M BEGGING! Goodluck and have a great summer!
VexiVicious 2007-05-31 ch 4,	So just read the first story and worked my way onto this. I really enjoyed the first one but is the story (on here or published) ever going to go back to the prophecy. At first I thought it was about the halfbreed boy in the Forest of Shire. Also I'd love to see a scene between her and the real Demetrius. Could you email me if the story is ever or already has been published or if you decide to post more on here. I'd add it to story alerts just in case ;) touchmeclover(at)hotmail(dot)com Thanks, I really enjoyed the story... it is in no way "sucky assed"
Auroris 2004-02-08 ch 4,	Ahem, and on one last note, I'm just suggesting that perhaps Carrie order for Sheldon's mind to be erased of all memories of the Fairy Kingdom then sent back to Earth. And also apologise for my previous review which didn't have the spacing I wanted it to have. And don't forget to add me onto your mailing list! ~Auroris~
Auroris 2004-02-08 ch 4,	Hey FantasiaFirst! I'm not sure if I ever reviewed "The Fairy Kingdom" number one yet, but if I haven't I apologize. I've read your works, but haven't left a single review-I think-but if so, I still apologize for not being a faithful reviewer. It's really too bad that you're going to discontinue this story and perhaps take it down, but I'm glad for you that your story/stories will be published. Nice to see that fictionpress.net writer isn't forever slaving over a story and only getting reviews for it, but also at a later date, money. I'm absolutely sure that your stories will get published and printed for the whole world to read. You can be sure that I'll buy one or if feeling cheap at the time, I'll borrow it from the library. I would like to be part of your mailing list, so that I'll be aware when your books are out in bookstores. It was considerate of you to do so for your readers. bows As a writer I deeply respect you and wish you good luck with the rest of your life. And on a reviewer's note, whenever I read a story on fanfiction.net or fictionpress.net, since the stories are all basically in the same font and have no book cover to sway my judgement, I can get a sort of "color" or "emotion" the book gives to me. This helps me decide on the quality of the story, since steady bright color(s) being issued from story equals good writing. With your first "The Fairy Kingdom" I got a vibrant rainbow, thus could imagine the scenes in great detail and understand the atmosphere. With "The Fairy Kingdom II" the rainbow colors diminished slightly to paler hues and as if touched with dust. The atmosphere, became a bit more somber, making it seem that the humorous tone had smoothly turned into more drama. Ciao for now then! ~Auroris~
spicketstill 2003-08-30 ch 4,	Lovely ending. (Or temporary ending.) A bit somber, yes. But it's touching. I got back from sleepaway camp a few days ago. I'm so surprised that your taking it off the net! I understand your reasoning, of course. It's just making me really sad. Can I be on the mailing list? I'd really like to see this story published. I don't care how long I have to wait, I want to read the ending! -Polekat P.S. If these get published, will you write something about all your reviewers on the dedication paga? That would be so cool! P.S.S. Will you be posting more stories? Ever? Email me. Please?
nahbia 2003-08-23 ch 4,	Aww, I'm sad =( I guess this answers my question about why you took the original Fairy Kingdom. I hope you'll be published soon, and that I'll run into your book. =)
nahbia 2003-08-23 ch 2,	Suckyass...haha. I can assure you it's not. =) Forgot to add you to my favorite stories...hmph.
nahbia 2003-08-23 ch 1,	WOWEE!! A sequel! I would never have found out either if I hadn't seen it in someone's favorite stories list. I read your original The Fairy Kingdom and I didn't remember anything about a sequel so I forgot to check back. =( Why did you take that down, anyway? New readers are going to be a bit confused about your sequel. =) I can't wait...a new plot, and romance between jacques and her! grins Oh and this first chapter (albeit second try) was GREAT! It was so funny how she realized how Jacques was giving her time to compose herself. =D Update soon!
rosemarygirl 2003-07-21 ch 4,	Hey, it would be great if you could add me to your mailing list! I've always loved your stories! Thanks.
Contia Mirian 2003-07-19 ch 4,	I'd love to be on the mailing list, I believe you have my email. As to the 'copying of ideas', well I'm sorry dearest, but it's not the most unique idea. The key would be how many details are the same. For all I know, I'm the one that someone was complaining about, but I've been writing mine long before I found your wondrous story. ;) Luck to you with your possible publishers. And be sure to keep the rights to your story, and if you feel so inclined, what ever you do don't give up the electronical ones. Get a... a... having a large vocabulary can really be annoying when it boots words out without discretion. One of those guys who goes over the legal stuff and looks out for new oppertunities for you. Ah! Agent. ^_^ (This has become quite annoying, next thing I know my typing skills will take a vacation and leave me with little to nothing with which ti write.) Either that or know the legal matters and be able to read the drivel. Final word of advice, if you do have an actual publishing company glancing over, look them up. And not just on the net. Personally, since I plan on sending mine off at some point (I.E. when I actually finish the pest) I'd be the one looking around. If one came to me, I'd be a little suspisous, as is my unfortunate nature. (Flattered, but suspisous) Having found this story a joy to read myself, I'd so hate for you to be bamboozled. We'll miss sharing our thoughts with you as well, I'm sure. My best advice would be to find a close friend (best friend quality, as in you SEE them regularly) to get addicted to the story and ask feed back from them. That's what I've done, and sniff I REALLY miss my five or six reviewers (I know there's more than that, but sadly I can't check anymore), but my best friend is my first reviewer and now my only. Once again, best of luck and tons of support. A friendly, happy for you (with a touch of concern) reviewer, Contia Mirian, Ice
Mystery 2003-07-15 ch 4,	I love your story. Its really sad that your not going to post any more chapters. And wanna to be on your mailing list. Tell me when its published.
NON-M 2003-07-15 ch 4,	Just finished reading it. Well... I am really sad that you decided not to continue it online and wish you the greatest success
Nichole Sedai 2003-07-15 ch 4,	blushing Oh, you make me feel special! Really, I was just being ornery, because I liked Jaques, but I feel special anyway. I'm glad the story turned out the way it did, though, because you're right about my reaction if it hadn't. Fortunately, I did understand that I wasn't going to get more chapters, or I'd really be complaining, but I understand. Actually, the thought has occured to me, as well, that maybe it's not a good idea to post here, both for plagerism and for publishing issues, but I'll never get better if I don't let someone read, and I don't have the courage to let people I know read it. I'd eventually like my dad to see my stories, but they've got to get a lot better before I'll have the courage for that. He's a good writer . . . although his fiction isn't published. So as much as I want to know how this is going to turn out, I understand. So, do you have a publisher already, or are you thinking in terms of the future eventuality? Just curious how long I have to wait to get my hands on the book. No plot changes in the first one from the ficpress version to publishing, right? I'd hate to have to email and complain again, but I guess it all depends on the publisher and the stronger sale and stuff. Oh, well. I still wanted the Detective let go, but only because he REALLY doesn't fit in. But then, maybe all humans have developed powers, and all it takes is living in the fairy world to make them come out. That sounds to easy and cliche, doesn't it? Anyway, I'll see you around. Any plans to continue Evander and Sythe?
Raberba girl 2003-07-15 ch 4,	Jaz-bunny! hug Just an idea I had, when I read you'd originally planned to make Jaques Demetrius; couldn't you have done that, but then had Demetrius/Jaques fall in love with Carrie? But anyway, I'll miss reading this story...keep me on that mailing list, I wanna hear when you're published!
Prantis - Queen of Hearts 2003-07-15 ch 3,	it occurs to me that i did not give you my email, it is... aahh_thepain_thepain@hotmail.com

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