Great job on this, it's really awesome!

Awesome poem. The end was just great. "And so I extend a hand to you,/Because I don't want to drown anymore". Great use of punctuation [something I have issues with in poetry] and vocabulary. Pretty good imagery, as well. Only thing is that there are maybe four lines that should probably be broken down some, because the way they are [being so long] looks kind of funny on the page. Otherwise, awesome job

~Jess