Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Beyond the Fake Smile

Asmodeus Sanity
2003-10-06
ch 1,
relateable (if thats a word...i wonder...) good poem the way you worded it. and of course, i like the theme...*bangs head against desk* so i'm a bit odd...what du u want from me? (-_-)
Rayne Maker
2003-06-11
ch 1,
I like this poem. It shows...more than a doll. Reading made me think of alot of people I know who are stuck in te "doll" relationship at their house, stuck between the fighting. This poem hit home for me. I love it.
Dahee Fanel
2003-05-23
ch 1,
Hehe, I like it, too! XD It IS different, and that's one of the reasons it's so great...it's always good to try new things. I love the haunting imagery in this...great job! :)
Ariasne
2003-05-23
ch 1,
Really nice poem. I like it
Return to Top