totally good... i love ur portrayal of death
*teehee*
keep on being a good writer frankie

Oh *claps* , it's wonderful! I 4got 2 tell u the name of my story, it's called
The Mother Shrine, it's kinda creepy too. Please R&R!

Awesome...and want to see real creepy? Please come read my poems! Heheheh...I have such an ego...but yes, this was a good poem. WRITING ABOUT DEATH IS FUN! Tee-hee...

oh cool. U r right it was a little creepy but it was still good. I hope u get lots and lots of reviews.