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| Repair me 2004-03-28 ch 1,   | really really good. i loved it, thanks |
| never enough 2003-06-03 ch 1, | If there was the possibility of having any tears left after the bizillion that i've cried over a situation just like you have described here i would cry them for you. This is beautiful, heartfelt and so sad. You have tremendous talent and a great voice to make it easily understood sweetie. I must tell you that there is more than disapproving frowns in this world, rare but there you'll see. And a kiss is a kiss just to the right people. This love that "we" have experienced will unfortunately always be a crime but a bigger crime would be to let them win and not love because of fear of retribution. Free your heart, it's the only way to let true love know where you are. |
| Mandie 2003-05-25 ch 1, | yep. I definatly like that one. Plus, it rhymes! lol. This is great stuff...I encourage you into writing more ^^ |
| Andrea Madison 2003-05-24 ch 1, | I loved it... It's well written. I hope you have better luck with your friend, though :( Thanks for a good poem. |
| Anthony Castro 2003-05-24 ch 1, | Wow, Sami, I have to say this is one of your best pieces of work. I'm sorry i haven't been spending as much time with you as before. I have just been really busy with school, and stuff. |
| scarywhenhyper 2003-05-24 ch 1, | OMG! THAT TWAS AWSOME! thats a really good poem. my friends are fighting and stuff like that. i'm gonna make them read this. |
| Alana Hikari-chan 2003-05-23 ch 1, | (Teary eyed) Wow. I... Think I know what this is about. Someone, (You?) comeing out and a friend not really likeing it... If this really happened, I'm so sorry for you. I can't... (Is at a loss for words) Never mind. Wow. ~ Alana |