Interesting ...

Don't worry. You'll be caught.

Nice. I liked it. I'd only make sure that you try to take out as much as you can because its such a long poem, in other words leave out only the things that are absolutly necessary. I dont think you did but try not to repeat lines or phrases because once you state an idea, and unless you're really trying to prod and poke at it, the reader gets it. Luvly luvly luvly, I'm very random too muahahaha...hehe.

i don't exactly know how you came up with this when you were depressed, but it's a good poem, i like it. _

*laughs*I liked it!

I have to say that the title is kind of odd.. in a cool kind of way. I liked this poem nicely done!

That's awsome keep writing, I love your poetry!

Very good!

what's a word for this poem... hmm... ahh, i can't think of it! nice poem. mysterious, too. you can do even better, i know it!

good

I liked this piece.. Its well expressed and great.. Guilt catched up eh.. Interestin.. Good piece..

Makes me suspect just how much u've gotten away with.. _ ::looks suspious::

heyas gurl! meh, what makes u think ur innocent? heh heh, just kidding. this poem is me fav!

I like the intensity you showed here.

Heart of the Sword

You caught me by surprise. This is very, very well done. The title is great. You are extremely talented.

Wow, heh heh, sound just like ya. u said u wrote when u were depressed? well, very nice anywasy.