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Reviews For: The Beginning

Mayflower
2003-06-20
ch 1,
.. HAH. >.> *pause*... HAH. o.o Uh.. Where's the rest of it, punk?!?! I don't see it. DO I? XD Nah.. it's great. AS per usual.. I cannot wait to read how you've killed off my lovely Fairyll and Ri-man. Almost as much as I cannot wait to read about a boy called Harry. >.> Who should die some- .. getting off track, slightly. :'D It's great! We loves it! For Daisy's the precious! =O

~ Insanity Personified.
Brandon Springer
2003-05-28
ch 1,
Fascinating, very fascinating...

I like the writing style that you use, which you've used in some of your other stories before. It's a Genesis-type intro obviously, but it's certainly better than others that I've read before. I lok forward to reading more. :)
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