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| Surautomatism 2003-11-29 ch 2,   | That was pretty good. Are you going to continue it? |
| Son of God and Sam 2003-11-05 ch 1, | this is crazy. im afraid that its just crazy. |
| Macabeak 2003-10-26 ch 2, | This is funny and interesting! I never thought of Heaven that way! ^_^ That thing with 'How many licks does it take to get to the center of a Tootsie Roll Lollipop' was good! Keep writing! |
| Jane Mullane 2003-10-26 ch 1, | I like that story, death is very... organised isn't it? |
| Chuckles 2003-10-26 ch 2, | Great chapter, though the scene with the recorded voice was a bit british, but I forgive ya(Ba-zing!). How you got your ** to a second chapter of anything boggles the very... very drunk mind. |
| Iz 2003-10-25 ch 2, | Very good. I like it. Great 2nd chapter too :o) |
| Jinxi 2003-09-27 ch 1, | Comedy...with a twist of spirituality thrown in...nice work! |
| AVIGON 2003-07-19 ch 1, | This is great. Unusual and funny, and you managed to create an entire "new world" in such a short story. You're good. |
| some cool chick 2003-07-12 ch 1, | this is cool. you should write more on it...unless you don't want to...in which you shouldn't. what happened to your website? |
| DemonCat 3003 2003-07-02 ch 1, | OO right -O(^*^)O |
| JoselleFD 2003-06-04 ch 1, | oh, cool. I liked it! It presents a different way for people to be transported to Heaven. Well, I thought it was pretty good!! |
| Hikari5 2003-05-26 ch 1, | nice peace. and piece |
| Soy bomb (funky munky or as... 2003-05-24 ch 1, | I like it. What a great way to die. |
| Marius of Rome 2003-05-24 ch 1, | OOh, I like! I think I'll buy a blue Honda when I'm older. You should add another chapter or so to this, ya know maybe the computer network in heaven is down due to a virus that was attached to an e-mail sent from the people in Hell, and it flips all the lists of who goes to heaven and hell So all he good people go to hell and all the bad people start rioting in heaven and strike out against St Peter... yeah, that might be fun! -Marius |
| adelewoods 2003-05-23 ch 1, | Nifty and different ^^ |