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Reviews For: Tarnished

kep
2003-05-25
ch 1,
wow. that's really good. i'm impressed. that has a lot of depth and is very well written. wow.
Kerbi
2003-05-24
ch 1,
ooh, i like that a lot, very in depth for a first grade experience, dang!
Celebrian SilverQueen
2003-05-24
ch 1,
Marvelous! This was exactly the way I felt towards boys when I was in first and second grade! (Third grade was when I started having crushes ^_^)

I checked your bio, and we're the same age. It's so nice to find another 13 year old here. You're one of the best teenage authors whose work I've had the pleasure of reading, so you're definitely going on my Favorites list. Cheers to you! ^_^
Diana Shore
2003-05-23
ch 1,
I liked it. Good imagery with the dried mud on the boy's hand.
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