That's it...FP.net is beginning to annoy me, this is the second I have submitted a review and it has not shown up...*mutters* happened when I reviewed Hele's stuff...anyway ^^ it's a very good chapter, I like your idea of giving lots of different opinions but is this fic going anywhere with Fiona?

wow...that was really good. It's in a more conventional format than the last two chapters, and I like it even more. It works really well. I want to see where you're going to take this.

this also works, though I'm a little confused about how this is continuing...I like the way that you're using lots of differnet viewpoints, and it shows the situation very well. Is this going to continue like this, or are you going to move forward in time? But it's very good.

Okie...sufficently freaky so I'll congratulate you. You're so twisted when you want to be, that's why you're my friend...*on some kind of drug to day* ^^

Whoo! Go you! You updated, a very short but pretty I dunno, scary (?) chapter...sorta, I dunno, informal since it's just a progress report.

wow...that's a really effective way of carrying on the story. I hope that you continue it soon.

Twisted aren't you? I like it...

This is dark...It's very good. Although I don't think that it's possible to write the next chapter in the same way...The pure angst cannot hold out for two chapters...But it's very good.