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| xo-lilacsxandxlolita-ox 2004-08-04 ch 1,   | That beautiful, ethereal, and wondrous. Very sad, yet very fitting, I suppose. Keep up the good writing. Hasta luego. chibichocobo |
| Shamara Ambrose 2003-06-10 ch 1, | Agh! What happened!? Angel of Light! That is TOTALLY wicked! Wow. This was really cool. My gosh, first and foremost, I wanted to say thanks for reading and reviewing my stories. I wanted to return the favor and besides, this story struck my fancy. Very, very interesting plot. I'm SO for the whole entire "star-crossed lovers" thing. With yours, it's pretty literal -- stars, I mean. I loved your descriptions. They're just beautiful. Details and descriptions, especially the ending when she returns to heaven, I felt like -- well I felt like I was seeing heaven with my own two eyes. It was breathtaking and vivid. Descriptions, you need them, but you don't want to "overdose" on them. Too much can take away from the ACTUAL setting, but you glided through it with soaring colors! You found the balance. I really like this story so far. I can't WAIT to see how it turns out! Mages and stuff not really my thing, but mixing it in with angels is cool --and the descriptions keep me hooked on like an addict to caffeine pills. So sad, so sad. OF COURSE HE WON'T FORGET HER! Now, I really wanna see how this ties in to the plot of the story. So many questions which can only be answered by YOU updating. But take your time. As a fellow author, I know that "time is of the essence." But please, continue! This story is excellent. It needs MORE recognition! Good luck with your writing! Love and farewell from the darkness, ~SHAMARA AMBROSE~ |
| zarsky 2003-05-26 ch 1, | CONTINUE! It was fabulously written and your style of writing is great. Do post another chapter up, I'm really looking forward to reading more! |
| Punk Rock Siren 2003-05-25 ch 1, | Wow that was really good! I enjoyed it a lot. |
| Alex Joy 2003-05-25 ch 1, | I can't figure out what to write. Well, that was horribly sad. My sister would have yelled at you for writing something sad in the first place, but I happen to like sad stories, if they're well-written. And that was. It was just sad. That sounds so dumb. But it's true. Really lovely:) |
| Underlined Twice 2003-05-25 ch 1, | Jeeze...not exactly your everyday Fox and the Hound, but not the happy-ending romance fic either. A nice combonation of the two though! I guess I see what you mean by the title... |
| wacka dkid 2003-05-24 ch 1, | its great! hope you get around to updating soon. can't wait to find out what happens next. -krissa |
| eleclya11 2003-05-24 ch 1, | Wow! You did a great job on your descriptions, I could picture things really well. And it's incredibly well thought out. I was wondering if you are going to write more. If you are, I promise to read that, too. 'Bye, eleclya |
| break me boy -x 2003-05-24 ch 1, | Oh, so sad. You made me cry, but it was great! Will there be any more chapters? Please write more soon! |