This is good - very refreshing. It's a nice change from most of the 'love' songs out there.

yeah, it's repetitive, but in a good way. the repetition is definitely an asset. this is one of my favorite works of yours...there's just two lines i would alter a bit: "this is for the days that you made me feel bad/

this is for the times you said you were mad". if you change any of the rest of it, though, i'll be seriously bummed out. :}

very good. i like it a lot and i wish there was a way i could hear it... you're definitely really good at writing songs with a sort of bitter, angry feel. this one is no exception. it's really awesome, but it needs a proof-read. you might want to go over it and punctuate :) and i think i found one typing mistake. over all it's an extremely good song, though.

aw, very pretty and sweet it think, it is a bit repetitive but i think that it can be gotten away with in songs, the flow defintely allows for it, moves right along i think while just reading it, that probably means you had some music in mind before writing, or not, im kinda stupid, anywayz, excellent song, full of emotion, nicely done

Cool song.. meaningful! Awesome job!