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| Aly1 2003-12-30 ch 1,  | abuseThis is good - very refreshing. It's a nice change from most of the 'love' songs out there. |
| chickadee 2003-08-22 ch 1, | abuseyeah, it's repetitive, but in a good way. the repetition is definitely an asset. this is one of my favorite works of yours...there's just two lines i would alter a bit: "this is for the days that you made me feel bad/ this is for the times you said you were mad". if you change any of the rest of it, though, i'll be seriously bummed out. :} |
| Liller 2003-06-07 ch 1, | abusevery good. i like it a lot and i wish there was a way i could hear it... you're definitely really good at writing songs with a sort of bitter, angry feel. this one is no exception. it's really awesome, but it needs a proof-read. you might want to go over it and punctuate :) and i think i found one typing mistake. over all it's an extremely good song, though. |
| not sure yet 2003-05-24 ch 1, | abuseaw, very pretty and sweet it think, it is a bit repetitive but i think that it can be gotten away with in songs, the flow defintely allows for it, moves right along i think while just reading it, that probably means you had some music in mind before writing, or not, im kinda stupid, anywayz, excellent song, full of emotion, nicely done |
| Needa S 2003-05-24 ch 1, | abuseCool song.. meaningful! Awesome job! |