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Reviews For: The 13th Castle
FoxTail13 2007-06-07 . chapter 1
There are many poets out there, some good and others bad, but you are absolutely amazing! I know, not so useful, but I am *truly* being sincere when I say you are a great poet.
byrdgirl 2004-06-24 . chapter 1
Wow! This one's really quite a shock. It's amazing. So when exactly are you going to blow this popsickle stand and start publishing?
-byrdgirl
Valerie Mackin 2004-02-13 . chapter 1
Something in common among the works I find to be truly something worth reading are those which inspire me to my own work. Thank you for tonight's inspiration.
Daily Judas 2003-12-25 . chapter 1
I am a fan. Seriously, you are amazing. I have considered dropping 10+ scattered reviews consisting of only "What an awesome idea." If I had the words, I would review more of your poems, because so many of them have stopped me dead in my tracks and presented a new idea or viewpoint. You are like my go-to philosopher. It's like, "Feeling cliche? Go look at LB's work; he'll give you something to chew on."
No joke, man. You rock. Anyway, I picked this particular poem to review because I first read it *two* months ago, and it's still with me. The way it comes full circle, the alluded-to impending death suddenly at center stage, only to be immediately sideswiped by egocentrism, bringing your point home in amazing fashion. Yes, that was an incomplete sentence, but that's okay, because I am way enthused.
This is my longest review ever, and, man, you deserve it.
bLuEFIre 2003-10-10 . chapter 1
Brilliant work, yet again. The ending was neat, and it's amazing how you manage to bring to life the things we never truly think about, but do exist. A great piece of writing.
Werecat99 2003-08-06 . chapter 1
Hehe, I liked that. I've been there and I could absolutely relate. You have a unique way with words... It's amazing how you make such jewels from everyday life.

A joy to read, as always.
Bakedo no Hikage 2003-07-27 . chapter 1
Hi. My story is almost finished. I am almost done with the third part of it; it's a 4parter. Escape has reached 100,0 words long. I liked the way the poem ended, lol. Dman. Why me?
matt13086 2003-07-07 . chapter 1
Sorry about that! My chapters for earth is under attack are not in order so you would need to find it. But it is in there. I have only heard of independence day. BUt not any of the others you were talking about. Thanks bye!
Libertas 2003-06-21 . chapter 1
I love this. Not only is this light and humorous, it also mirrors my situation sometimes... *sigh* I happen to be a clumsy, accident-prone fool. :P

Anyway, good work. Your poems rock. B)
Animagess 2003-06-09 . chapter 1
The self-absorbed perspective and the use of language result in a strangely engaging poem. By turns somewhat chilling and mildly profound (which makes for an interesting combination). Wonderful.
disheartenedwolf 2003-06-08 . chapter 1
*claps* Enjoyable poem. I loved how you described everything, and how you made your poem into a small comedy. Very nice job.
Elij 2003-06-02 . chapter 1
LOL!

I enjoyed the gentle sarcasm in your line immediately after your first stanza: "That was nice." It set the mood for the rest of your poem very well.

Your vignette is a great portrayal of distraction and not keeping one's mind in the immediate present.

I liked this.

Nicole :-)
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