 Bohemian-Pen 2005-03-15 . chapter 1This sounds so much like some stuff one of my friends and I went through...I can totally relate, beautifully written! |
 Sokorra Lewis 2003-07-23 . chapter 1Another Great poem. I plan on reading the story soon...just have to sleep first. It's 1:34 in the morning...not the best time for quality reviews as this and the last one I sent show |
 MelodyReiterLee 2003-06-16 . chapter 1This is very good. ^_^ Aww..I'm sorry that it happened. Times like this can be very hard to get through. I never understood when a friend of mine did this too. |
 Vana Burke 2003-05-27 . chapter 1Dammit! When I clicked log in it erased all the stuff I had written which was a lot! But that's ok...
This is very very good... I particularly like the beginning and the end, but the whole thing is still great! It's almost angst-y, ya know?
Hm... tres tres bien!
Dammit I forgot everything else I wrote. Sorry. But great job you are a very talented writer! |
 Chrissy Greenleaf 2003-05-26 . chapter 1This is tear-jerking! Very good. The "why oh why" is sort of repetative and doesn't sound good... it's great! |