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| DeViLDaughTeR 2003-11-13 ch 1,   | I liked this a lot very good! |
| Kohakunushi 2003-11-10 ch 1, | i liek thie poem... *this its cool!! i like the flow of it and how it ryhmes... hope u read mine to and uh... U WRITE LOTS OF STORIES?POEMS! yes... i wanted to say that... :-D ~YuRi |
| Just Another Face 2003-08-05 ch 1, | OOh,I like this one, Colie, Its neat. I know you probably won't look back to see this, lol, but i liked it alot ^.^' |
| SheBeastie 2003-05-24 ch 1, | Me again I think we all feel at one time or another that we have failed our fathers if we have had or have one. I know I do. I like your style of writing it is very to the point. By the way whats the swear word? Human? But I agree the little ones shouldn't read this it might upset them. Love SheBeastie |
| Smoky Bear 2003-05-24 ch 1, | good content. u can sense the raw emotion in the poem. good job |