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| Anjeni Windsinger 2003-07-28 ch 1, | Aw hell, this is amazing. Keep writing!! |
| nimue webweaver 2003-05-26 ch 1, | omg...wow. that just reaches out and grasps u and then binds you to it. i just...wow, u get such a feeling of loss from it. just...omg |
| StarWolf 2003-05-24 ch 1, | ^^ Very nice. It flowed pretty well, too, which is a definite plus. Only one thing - it's spelled "damned." The way you have it means stopping water (like a beaver). I don't know if this was intentional, and I'm not trying to nitpick; just letting you know. Good job! Me likeys. ^__^ Thanks for reviewing my poem - it cheered me up. Keep writing, ~*StarWolf*~ |