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Reviews For: Envelope of Night

Anjeni Windsinger
2003-07-28
ch 1,
Aw hell, this is amazing.

Keep writing!!
nimue webweaver
2003-05-26
ch 1,
omg...wow. that just reaches out and grasps u and then binds you to it. i just...wow, u get such a feeling of loss from it. just...omg
StarWolf
2003-05-24
ch 1,
^^ Very nice. It flowed pretty well, too, which is a definite plus. Only one thing - it's spelled "damned." The way you have it means stopping water (like a beaver). I don't know if this was intentional, and I'm not trying to nitpick; just letting you know. Good job! Me likeys. ^__^ Thanks for reviewing my poem - it cheered me up.

Keep writing,

~*StarWolf*~
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