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| McCabe 2004-04-18 ch 1,   | That was sweet. Reminded me of my first boyfriend, back before we knew what sex was and I discovered I only like girls. ::Sigh:: You've made me feel pleasantly nostalgic. |
| Lizzybelle Kay 2003-11-07 ch 1, | this is so cute. he's blessed to have you! |
| Princess Chloe 2003-07-23 ch 1, | OOh, stanzas! Awesome. This is great. Write more things like this! ~Chloe |
| JackMcMichael(AKA hopeless 2003-06-23 ch 1, | Reminds me of the girl I have a crush on... *cough*Sophie*cough* |
| Lost Soldier REVAMPED 2003-06-08 ch 1, | Wow, this is really good. I liked how you used comparisons in your piece, such as pb&j, lol. m... easy mac, lol. Well, another good piece for another good author, keep up the good work |
| Needa S 2003-06-03 ch 1, | Beautiful...Excellent job!! |
| Keep it 100 2003-06-01 ch 1, | That was a great display of talent. ~Heart of the Sword |
| True Illusion 2003-05-31 ch 1, | lol, cute. i know EXACTLY how that is tho. how long have you and your bf been going out? me and mine have for almost 7 months...wow, i hardly ever think about it like that. crazy. anywhoz, great poem, i loved it, keep up the greatness! |
| inconsequential me 2003-05-29 ch 1, | Ah! This is so incredibly...Adorable, and heart felt, and so sincere...And above all things, so personal. I only had to read it once through and I could tell that you SERIOUSLY have some amazing feelings for this wonder-boy. I love how you channel out your emotions into such amazing poetry...Kudos on that one!! |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2003-05-26 ch 1, | very touching poem, very sweet. i hope he feels the same way for you. and thanks for reviewing my poem ;) |