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| Wei Min 2007-01-09 ch 1,  | Wow, this is a very meaningful and well-written poem! Keep up the good work! ^_^ |
| Morphymthos 2004-11-07 ch 1, | A really great poem! I'll definately will check you account often from now on! ^^ |
| Freakadog 2004-04-14 ch 1,  | Wow this is beautiful. You way with words is incredible. You describe the scene perfectly. After reading this, your review of me is all the more honoring and humbling. |
| Sandy716 2003-06-12 ch 1, | I'm not sure how to say this without putting you on... but reading your poems gives some kind of fulfillment after reading it. Somehow it makes me want to clap my hand after reading it. |
| JN Paredes 2003-05-25 ch 1, | Rain- the title, and presumably your objective correlative. I like your line cutting, the sessura (sorry I dunno really the spelling), it's very simple. But I'd prefer that you'd be like, more adventurous with your line cutting, considering the fact that you don't have any periods, just one comma throughout the whole poem. I'm sorry if I'm nit-picking :) "Flickering rain" - usually people use the phrase "flickering fire," so it sort of confused me. But all the other lines are beautiful, really. I know you love the rain n'all. Great poem! |
| eew 2003-05-25 ch 1, | That was relaxing. Great flow of words. |
| Catella Erato 2003-05-24 ch 1, | Least there was no thunder or lightning. ^_~ Good poem! Very...morden and normal. ^_^ Tis a good thing. Keep it up! ~ Little Dog Muse |