Interesting poem, I admit. It has very good imagery, I thought and it gives you a good mental picture of everything happening. The garden sounds so beautiful, it's a shame there probably isn't a real place like it. Bu then there is all the pain that she you, and it makes the beauty of the garden meaningless to you. It was wonderful. You are definetally on my fav's list.

*gasp*...love?...i envy her for having love like this...beautiful...

I only stumbled across you by accident but you are amazing!

This poem is fantastic!

Diana x

P.S. You might enjoy my poem "Goddess", give it a go!