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Reviews For: Speak

wyckydgoddess 2007-05-08 ch 1,	You should defidently continue
surrealphobia 2007-04-25 ch 1,	angel24, I think your poem was ok it spelled out some things a little to plainly, I think it would be great if you used a bit more detailed imagery. "People don't ostracize you because of your religion in high school. People ostracize you because you are weird." Weird, intresting word huh? I don't know your defintion of weird but I am a typical person. I am unique but I do not pick a religon out of a hat just to be a rebellious teen fixated on anarchy. Wicca is a long established religon predating Christianity. As for the dynamics of high school, I don't know if you currently attend one (though I doubt it) but here people are shunned for religon, it dosen't matter what you are. Hot cheerleaders are included. I think you should really do some more research on wicca before you all out bash it due to ignorance. Please review me back if you wish to continue this debate. Surreal
Dani P 2007-04-23 ch 1,	you have potential, but there was no room left open for interpretation here. you kind of spelled everything out loud an clear. i suggest metaphors and a thesaurus. other than that I like the idea. very true.
EvilFireWitch 2006-03-21 ch 1,	Just so you are aware, you are supposed to critique the writing style and errors made in the work, not the subject matter, and not to disagree with the piece. That is not what a review is for. It is to help the writer improve as a writer, not so that you can refute their essays. Also, I never used the word "harem" once. You sound like a first class feminist to me, though I hope I'm wrong. It's also disgusting that I have to use a review in order to correct your error in using a review. I find this entire situation pathetic, and I hope you never do that to someone again. That is not what this site is for.
Miss Dolly 2006-02-18 ch 1,	The atmosphere of the poem was so somber... I love the way you tinker with the language of your poem too. i.e: "it breaks loose the human knot." I thought this poem was well written and that you are no less of poet than any other author on this site. Don't doubt yourself! Keep writing.
ta1nt3d1uv 2005-03-31 ch 1,	I liked it. Continue please.
Second-Hand-Screamo 2005-03-23 ch 1,	Interesting. I think you should continue this, only because I'd like to see where you go with it. There are so many possibilities..Also, you reviewed a piece of mine, and told me that I was being naive, or something like that. Just so you know, that piece is fiction, as is all but one piece I wrote. I was just doing a contrast paper and thought I'd post it.But I agree with you, people label whether you like it or not.Good poem, please continue.
Layla737 2005-03-11 ch 1,	I like this poem. especially because I'm such an outspoken person myself. I also really really like your author page bio thing. I think it's meaningful. and it flows very nicely. btw, thank you for your comment on my Why the South Lost the Civil War essay.
RyuTheMagi 2005-01-03 ch 1,	I liked it, it was very well writen and carried a poweful message. Im actually reviewing you becuase i want to talk to u about your review on the Wiccan Essay. "If it harms no one, do what you want" Thats the creed is wicca, to the best of my knowledge...but yes, to the wiccans (and myself) magick is very very real, and they do cast spells...but that is a small part of the religion. if you would like, we can talk about this more on the internet or somthing, but check out my profile on this site and my SN should be on there. i think my email is too. yes, im that much of a loser! i LIVE for this kind of stuff! -Ryu
PhiloNysh 2004-06-17 ch 1,	Wow! That is so beautiful. It's well written and I love the wave-like pattern moulded into the poetry form (almost like a sound wave!). It is also immensely inspirational- hopeful
JoselleFD 2003-06-08 ch 1,	Hello!! That was incredible, and to think, you don't see yourself as a good poet! Keep writing this; this poem deserves it I think you have alot of talent, and that you should continue to sharpen them! Keep up the good work!! Joselle
Wildwolf 2003-05-27 ch 1,	Hihi! Wow, that was cool... I was referred by Marius of Rome. America... the land of the free and the freedom of speech. ...not until you're 21. Blah... Yes, do continue!
DarkOpalDragon 2003-05-25 ch 1,	I like that. Not a very good poet, my foot! That was great in terms of poetry, and it seems to come from the depths of your feelings. Keep writing, you're really good.
Marius of Rome 2003-05-25 ch 1,	Konnichiwa! I like this! It makes you look at things in a different way than normal. I woyld also like to thank you for reviewing my story 'What is insanity...Really?' And you sound like a slighty modified version if my best friend! It's a little scary! Ironically I am on the phone with her having a not-so-deep conversation with her over the sound camels make... Oh well that's life for ya. Good Job! And keep writing!

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