   Shinsei na Ryu 2003-12-26 . chapter 4i was too busy reading the story,so I'll comment on it all here.It's pretty good,although I don't quite feel caught up in Till's part.His actions are a bit too...vague,although your actions more than make up for it.Keep up the good works,though.Truly,a horror to it's fullest |
 DarkRingsCorp 2003-11-17 . chapter 1COOL! |
 Sakamura 2003-06-18 . chapter 4Wow...intersting turn of events. This story is GOOD! |
| Sakamura 2003-06-17 . chapter 2 Good chapter as usual...lol. Can't wait to read the rest. |
| Sakamura 2003-06-10 . chapter 3 Wow...weird but cool. This story is action packed |
 Destin 2003-06-02 . chapter 3This is one really really good story ! Please write more ! I'm amazed how good it is ! But enough about how good it was I just would like to say I think the narroator is so cool ! Please update soon !O and if you can ,can you please read one of my stories? Please update I mean it ! I can't wait till the 4th chapter !
-Destin Scar |
 a m b r y l l i e n 2003-05-28 . chapter 1Same thing as what I said to Slayer's version of the story: Great, and keep it up! Waiting anxiously for your next part!
.:|*Ambryllien*|:. |
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