this was cute. i liked it.

yum, jell-o...*drool*

cute poem!

Creative, nicely done. -NB

it was interesting, i have never put myself in the point of jell-o

I found this amusing. Other than that, nothing else.

"Until I'm eaten!" :P

_* :D :D :D :D :D :D (this means I'm cracking up) :). I like your creativity! Certainly a fresh look, but by victorious, does the JEll-O mean that it's glad that it has pleased people, or am I missing something huge, here? (I do that a lot when I try to critique poetry. I'm not a poetry person . . .)

Geenk! Where'd you ever get the idea to write something like that? Very original... very cute. But man, that was weird... _

The things people write about these days... Geesh! j/k Good job. Keep writing.

haha, i haven't seen a poem like this in a while! nice job! very imaginative :-D makes me want to look at jello and eat some &)

...kool...cant rate/criticize poems cause i dont know anything about em...

not luv triangles, luv squares-Meaningless

I see they are happyTo discover I've won.

Lol! But I think it loses when it gets eaten.

For I have becomeJell-O.

I can just see this big, dramatic pause as this is being delivered, lol. Very cute!

hehe,that was was really interesting!

lol, very amusing...cute D

Wow. It takes talent to do something like this.

Heart of the Sword