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| tdawgcars 2006-01-28 ch 1,  | abuseVery Very VERY nice poem...I really like it...revealing that there are differen't emotions in everyone...hate and sadness...and either one we can feel at any moment...loved the poem. |
| voiceofapen 2005-09-15 ch 1, anon. | abusei loved the thought in this poem i read it alli loved the length as wellnice poem helped me with a simular situation thanks |
| QueenofPotatoes 2005-02-18 ch 1, | abuseWow...That was just...wow. Brilliantly written, and a beautiful poem. Absolutely amazing. |
| Desire in the Heart 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was very powerful. It was wonderful. |
| Reality x Check 2004-08-11 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely amazing. I love the way you linked angels and demons with love. Your poem blew me away. |
| sapharia 2004-02-24 ch 1, | abuseI really loved it. It's long, but its good at the same time. I hope you keep writing like this. |
| GypsyMothra 2004-01-12 ch 1, | abuseIt was long, but you know, it was worth the reading. This was very good. I love the entire theme, the words, the lines. Hey look at that, I love it all! Really nice with the Cain and Abel references, too. I think that added a nice touch. Good job. |
| DreamHarbor 2003-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseDude...this is a ** cool piece, man! take 12 outta 10! :D:D:D:D:D:D At least u rhyme...I don't! ;) |
| Fazed Angel 2003-11-06 ch 1, | abusewow! touching! loved it so much I HAVE to put it on my favorite list! Listen, keep writing, this is the best. If you ever get bored check out my writing. Fazed Angel |
| The Course 2003-08-16 ch 1, | abusethat was amazing. it was truly beautiful |
| Kerbi 2003-08-15 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful- one of very few long poems that manages not to be dull. Captivating, entrancing. Beautiful work. |
| Mackenzie Anderson 2003-07-31 ch 1, | abuseThe road seems to always come back to you. The path to redemption is so long, so hard, and sometimes it doesn't seem worth it. It probably won't surprise you that I just got out of the hospital again about two weeks ago. My own choice, and I checked myself in without my mother's approval. I finally did something for me. The more I change, the more I wish you could see that I have. The more I miss you and what could have been. This poem struck a nerve in me, though honestly parts of it confused me. Still, well done... I wish I had read it sooner. Keep up the brilliant work... you're truly going places. |
| Maria Rose Black 2003-07-09 ch 1, | abuseI like that. It's so beautiful and sad. You did a great job on this!! |
| LostC 2003-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI believe I'll save this one to my harddrive. From beginning to end... so incredibly breathtaking. When I hit the last line, the last word, I found myself speechless. I think, if there was ever a moment where I found myself truely almost afraid to submit a review... because the review, even if packed with the most flattering words man ever invented, might not do justice to the writing it was intended to review... it would be now. After reading this. I feel for the angel, hidden behind the demon's rage, with no will to fight without the love of the one who released the demon. You hold my eternal worship. *LostC |
| Swany Harvestar 2003-06-12 ch 1, | abuseIt's really great !! So BEAUTIFUL the image you used... I have no words !! I admire the way you wrote such a perfect poem... Wow... U left me breathless ! ^^ ~~¤ KaWaii ¤~~ |