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| Feiery 2004-06-16 ch 1,  | oh...wow...that sounds depressing but i believe everybody can connect with that in some way or another, nice insight...hm...*thinks*..."I want to be a person"..I like that. |
| Seeress 2003-11-04 ch 1,  | This is another one that I like a lot. It conveys so much and the emotion put into it just jumps out at you. I think there are quite a few people who can relate to being untouchable... |
| FoxxieFantasy 2003-10-22 ch 1, | wow. thats lots to take in and sort out. this sounds so depressing and lonely-like.ah. i think everybody feels those feelings sometimes and its really great u were able to put all this in words! this is so deep. (btw, u wrote this near ur b-day eh?) wow...this...wow. |
| Paper Flowers 2003-07-15 ch 1, | Wow. This is really beautiful, especially in the way that it's poignant and disturbing. Very emotionally effective. You have an amazing talent. ^_^ |
| Meghanna Starsong 2003-05-27 ch 1, | you gave me a really different perspective into your soul, aidan. i mean...it must be tough standing up for who you are. and feeling this alone... as always, your style and spelling improves each time i read. i can really sense the individuality in your words... i think, in retrospect, most people are 'cut off' from others in many different ways... excellent poem as always |
| Jealous 2003-05-25 ch 1, | this is a really really wonderful poem. i can relate to it completely. |