how many times has someone told you your poems are well written?

well, they STINK.

just kidding. i've read a few of your poems already. that realling long one about the kiss under the bleachers was great, but the page wouldn't load all the way so I couldn't review it (let alone read the last of the poem) so I want to say that that poem is my favorite so far. and this poem is meaningful as well. I am guessing it is about the rape (i hope so), and in that sense i like it that much more.

Josh and those days in Drama when the back seats were always dark.D.

I love this poem, it flows really well and tells an interesting story as it goes along.

Keep it up.

Very, very good. just awesome flow, rhythm, and imagery, and I see that you are keping up the good work, so good job!

I like the imagry in this poem a lot... well done

"his lover of all things unloved."

Another beautiful line.

And another beautiful poem.

Wow once again u managed to make me think. Great!

Your poetry as a whole has so much imagery and emotion in it that I think my head is gonna explode. The words chosen go perfectly in sync with message of each poem and never once falter. I read your poetry and I can hear the "narrator's voice" reciting it and when the poem ends I am left thinking of a person who faced so much turmoil and yet, found the strength to continue on from her own willpower.

You are just one awesome poet in general and I wish the best of luck in the continual growth of your writing skills.

-Nikki

P.S: Ima coming back to review your stories soon too, so beware!

O...confused. I must read it again and contenplate it's meaning.

that was amazing.