|Reviews for The Sky that was golden|
| grip 9/13/05 . chapter 1
how many times has someone told you your poems are well written?
well, they STINK.
just kidding. i've read a few of your poems already. that realling long one about the kiss under the bleachers was great, but the page wouldn't load all the way so I couldn't review it (let alone read the last of the poem) so I want to say that that poem is my favorite so far. and this poem is meaningful as well. I am guessing it is about the rape (i hope so), and in that sense i like it that much more.
| D 6/7/05 . chapter 1
Josh and those days in Drama when the back seats were always dark.D.
| Moon-Chaser 12/9/04 . chapter 1
I love this poem, it flows really well and tells an interesting story as it goes along.
Keep it up.
| Thought Monger 11/5/04 . chapter 1
Very, very good. just awesome flow, rhythm, and imagery, and I see that you are keping up the good work, so good job!
| Soviet 8/25/04 . chapter 1
I like the imagry in this poem a lot... well done
| VividShimmer 6/11/03 . chapter 1
"his lover of all things unloved."
Another beautiful line.
And another beautiful poem.
| shortalee 6/1/03 . chapter 1
Wow once again u managed to make me think. Great!
| Nicole Lauren 5/25/03 . chapter 1
Your poetry as a whole has so much imagery and emotion in it that I think my head is gonna explode. The words chosen go perfectly in sync with message of each poem and never once falter. I read your poetry and I can hear the "narrator's voice" reciting it and when the poem ends I am left thinking of a person who faced so much turmoil and yet, found the strength to continue on from her own willpower.
You are just one awesome poet in general and I wish the best of luck in the continual growth of your writing skills.
P.S: Ima coming back to review your stories soon too, so beware!
| Sun-Kissed Lover 5/25/03 . chapter 1
O...confused. I must read it again and contenplate it's meaning.
| kissing suicide 5/25/03 . chapter 1
that was amazing.