It's an interesting story... more of a personal essay really. Good message.

Jason

very good. i really like your casual yet smart kind of writing style. my friends at college sound like your high school friends. best kind of group to stay with. anyway, nice piece. i'd appreciate it if you could take a look at my work sometime, i appreciate getting the opinion of a good writer. thanks. keep writing. you're talented.

Well, I like your writing style. You're doing a good job with this. I'm not gay, but I am don't have a problem with people who are. All I hope is that this story doesn't get to sexual.
Anyway, I like it. Keep up the good work.